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Please let me take you, dear sweet child,
Out of the darkness and into the light
'Cause I have faith in you, dear sweet child.

Though the black has swallowed us,
It cannot keep our sparks from burning out,
If you fall I will catch you, dear sweet child.

Have faith, dear sweet child,
For someday, Primus will grant us salvation,
Don't lose your way, dear sweet child.

You've come so far, little one,
With each new day that comes, you grow stronger,
Never lose what light you have left, dear sweet child.

Go the distance, dear sweet child,
Hold onto your dreams, the world is built on dreams,
Rise above the stars, dear sweet child,
Reach out, dear sweet child, and never let go.
This was a poem I wrote upon the request of ~SteelBlastAreya. She wanted something in return for a little fanart for my Birth fanfic.

Well, I couldn't resist a little creativity. I had to push my skills to the limit and I was eventually at my wits end because I never thought poetry was so complex. But then three songs pushed me to keep on going. Three songs that inspired me write like there was no tomorrow:

Iridescent - Linkin Park
You're Not Alone - Soasin
Lullaby - Nickelback

Then the tune from an old favourite of mine If We Hold On Together by Diana Ross just made this poem even more better.

Yes, as you can see, I added two quotes in there. One was from one of the songs I got inspired from, and the other was from a very special person who always sparks a tiny light of hope and love in each and every one of us. For without him, there could never be a true hero from deep within our hearts:

"Hold onto your dreams, the world is built on dreams."
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SteelBlastAreya Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Still so beautiful :iconchuuplz: you should post this on fanfiction ^w^
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Spiritblast Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmmm, nah.
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SteelBlastAreya Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Why? :iconnojoyplz: do it! >o<
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Spiritblast Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a bit shy when it comes to poetry. People will laugh at me...
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SteelBlastAreya Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
No they won't! D: believe in yourself! :iconairguitarheroplz:
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Spiritblast Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No, dun wanna do it. XP
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SteelBlastAreya Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Ddddoooooo iiiitttttt :iconwoooplz:
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Spiritblast Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nah. :P
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RazorBlastSpirit Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looking at this lullaby and then to the story Through Dying Eyes I think it so adorably cute and it fits so well for their situation! 8D :iconmonkeyloveplz: Just too cute!!! It'll be really cute when Orion sings this to Bumblebee :giggle:
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Spiritblast Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Razor! I'm glad you like it. :heart: Your sister was very happy with it. :D
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